

My little metal woman is suffering from depression this morning . You see, she has all her best trendy gear on , she has made a real effort to be attractive and only nine people have stopped by to admire her so far . She is starting to talk about therapy :-)
I think I have a problem with my title . I have written in the past about the importance of having the right key words in your title .Well I think I have failed my little woman and not complimented her with words that would get her noticed . Understandably she is not talking to me now .... a reaction that I am not immune to , after all I have a wife and three daughters who often do the same if husband or dad lets them down ,
So I need help from the dolphins ...what do you think about the title ...here is the link to the listing ... She is such an attractive figurine , it would be a shame to not show her off to the eBay world ..

Oh, the poor little thing! How could anyone resist such a cutie? I don't understand this one at all. Take heart, Rob. There's still plenty of time left in the auction.
ReplyDeleteI feel your pain! Hand Painted is good...figurine is good...
ReplyDeletefashionable and trendy are probably two words that are never entered into a search query.
Retro, 60's, 70's look, disco queen (whichever era your little woman is representing)...maybe a reference to size in the title - she's quite tall at 12 Inches.
So, maybe something like this "very tall hand-painted metal figurine of a disco queen (or a 70's swinger or 60's hippie or whatever"
Thanks ladies
ReplyDeleteI'll make the changes
Your humble servant
Rob